[...] Not sure if you've had a chance to read my spec script entitled "Indiana Jones and the Stone of Destiny". I need some reviews so I can rework it, right now it's about 25 pages too long, and some of the characters are coming off flat, any advice would be helpful. I plan on doing a "Reboot Awakens" episode in the future about screenwriting and will post some of the reviews, should be pretty cool. [...]