Betreff: Re: WIP: Gralstagebuch ( Hero Version )

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Great work, Stefan Jones and MurdocXXL!

I have some suggestions:
1) The white ("ripped off") section of the Melchizadek page is sometimes bigger and sometimes smaller. You can see that for example in one b-prop it is smaller: [click!] so that you can see more of the Melchizadek drawing. It is possible that in the hero prop one Melchizadek is without this white section i.e. the whole picture is seen.
2) Use thicker highlighter on the Sinai map (your first post). You can see how Magnoli did this: [click!]
3) Lancelot - I think that this page is red. Here is the screenshot:

The original picture of Lancelot: [click!]
But I don't know if every Lancelot page is in color or only this one (it would be Signature 9 Page 6), so I will ask on COW.

All in all, this is really amazing work. Keep it up!

Best,
mszynisz

EDIT: The Lancelot page is not in color! It's just an optical illusion! Sorry for bother!